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We're clouds that were sweet lullabies
And dilemmas that reassure a salty touch
Of birds flying high through autumn-tinged skies
Dysfunction incorporated scheming as such.

Smoke-stained thank-yous that temper a hail
Beneath your wavering impenetrability.
As humility merges with cheap poison retail
Apprehension uncovers your water-logged invisibility.

Counterfeit comedies dance in between awkward welcomes
As I fall victim to your sunlit smiles
Park benches taste progress with more insentient outcomes
Because acid-based makeup puts pride in denial.

Flawless disorder gives the illusion of normality
While hidden discomforts betray your indifference
Tears will soon fall as blades to your sanity
As I question anxiety over deceit as a preference.

Internal umbrellas protect you from opportunistic showers,
Treasure troves hiding in the lack of motivation.
I deviously prod the shy, freedom-deprived flowers
That are your alienated eyes drowning in unwanted information.

Only the maps drawn laced through your voice
Are my guidance past this overly cancer-lined playground
Mild mechanical disorders juxtapose with my choice
Of dancing with you as we continue to go down.
it wasnt meant to be a love poem!! i didnt mean it i swear!!! D8 *sobs*
tell what what ya think!!
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DovePoet Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I have no idea what this poem is talking about, but it's really fun to say! I finally made it through the poem without messing up once!
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cinty-insanity Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010
=D haha, yeah....i havnt tried to say it aloud, but i stumble in my head enough XD
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DovePoet Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Do you stutter, or is it just because of the fancy words?
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cinty-insanity Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2010
kind of, when under pressure XD so kind of both
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DovePoet Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
XD XD XD XD XD
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
:D :D :D :D :D
:P :P :P :P :P
8D 8D 8D 8D 8D
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cinty-insanity Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010
XD
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DovePoet Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
The ':P' guy looks like he's picking his nose with his tongue...
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cinty-insanity Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2010
XD yus, indeed.
yummmm XD
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"... as we continue to go down." :giggle:
:iconhurrplz:
-gigglesnort-
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:clap: That was an amazing peice! With simple verses to compliment difficult words, you made this poem worth reading for moi. I adored it. ;)
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