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I tried to jump for the bandwagon
Just a little late;
Tripped over my own ego,
Had to watch you ride away
In your own little comfort zone,
Made impossible for me to stay,
Knowing even though you wanted me to,
I could never say...

[Chorus]
What's on my mind, what's on my mind,
(I don't even know anymore)
You're one of a kind,
Damn hard to find
And even harder to keep

I'll try to be all the answers you need
Every yes and no,
And anything that falls in between
All the wonders she'll never know.
Falling short of fairytale endings
Was never my intention
Unable to think, my head's going to explode
'Cause you refuse to ease the tension.

[Chorus]
What's on my mind, what's on my mind,
(I don't even know anymore)
You're one of a kind,
Damn hard to find
And even harder to keep

Maybe in a different world, a different time, a different me
You would fall for someone I could call myself.
I lost track of who I was while trying to find out who you are,
Still lost in transit, unable to find the will to call for help.
But I just can't stop thinking about...
(You)
What's on my mind, what's on my mind,
(I don't even know anymore)
You're one of a kind,
Damn hard to find
And even harder to keep
[Chorus x2]
Yeah it's a song I wrote not so long ago...
Um, it does have a melody, I'll post a youtube video once I figure out how to play guitar or be bothered to write a piano part. Please leave criticism and/or feedback.
Oh and I'm sorry dearest watchers (inactive for the most part) I just installed windows seven on my laptop, so I've lost a lot of scanned images I was gonna post, and I haven't yet installed the program for the printer again, so it will be awhile before I upload any more traditional art, but when I do, there shall be millions and millions of them!! :D
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triplet-falls Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2010
wow that's really good!
you're so lucky to be able to write songs and all.....i totally fail at that kind of stuff...
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cinty-insanity Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
thanks =)
haha, aaawwhh, have you tried??
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triplet-falls Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
no I haven't tried actually, but I would have no where to start and build from....plus I can't sing like you and pretty but fail at composing piano music :)
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cinty-insanity Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
haha, well you should!! i start just with an emotion... pretty generic, but it works =)
and you dont need to sing to compose... =P
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triplet-falls Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
haha, yeah I guess...
And yeah that's good!
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DovePoet Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I think it sounds pretty... too bad I don't know what it sounds like XP
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cinty-insanity Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2010
thanks :D just make up your own tune... its pretty generic, but i like it =) and thanks heaps for the :+fav:
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:iconxxsasukeuchiha4evaxx:
You know my thoughts on this already, I think.

But, I still haven't gotten my two requests and Christmas picture, yet. ;P
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cinty-insanity Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010
In the authors comment!! Your requests shall be the first of a few million traditional pieces that I'll upload... when I finish figuring out windows seven and rescan everything :XD:
thanks muchly :D
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:iconxxsasukeuchiha4evaxx:
Aww, I can't get the actual things? D:
You're welcome. (:
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