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Red is the taste like rust and paprika
                     the touch of heat, peeling sunburn
              Smells like cranberries and sounds like rage


Pink is rasberries and fairy floss
       sounds like cash registers
                 the feel of a newborns fingers and toes


Orange smells like curry
                             eggs,
               and feels like an electric blanket,
                  sounds like a dying fire


Yellow is mustard seeds and chicken salt, is ticklish and giggling,
                     Feels like baby chick's feathers and lemon juice on a fresh cut
                           

Green tastes like lemon sorbet and freshly mown grass,
                                                                Feels like felt material
                          and early morning mist, heavy fog


Blue is the wind in your hair and eyes, and the doona over your head
         it sounds like pebbles and stones and flutes
                                           is the smell of old lavender


Purple is cool metallic and sticky midnights
                 like lilacs and the brush of heavy wavy hair
                                like grapes and dragonfruit


Black feels like velvet
           tastes like sleeping pills and licorice
                                           sounds sardonic, like sarcasm and sighs


Brown smells like cinnamon and cedar and musk
            feels splinters and tastes of nutmeg and chocolate
                           feels like whooping cough and sounds the same

White is spearmint and sunshine
                  and dentists appoinments and under-cooked pavlova


Rainbows are jelly and coriander seeds
                        smells like helium
                                   they feel like corn starch and lukewarm water
                   and joint hands and group hugs
I tried to capture colour for the blind.
Because they cannot see (duh) you cannot describe one colour as or like another. You cannot say orange is the colour of oranges because they have never seen an orange (assuming they've been blind since birth). You have to appeal to their other senses like smell and taste etc., even if it doesn't visually match up (eg. purple is cool metal, but metal itself is grey). I tried to do this by finding things that described a colour but weren't visually the colour itself, but had some trouble (brown).

I feel I described green and purple and black the best. White is incredibly hard to feel, and it was near impossible to smell a rainbow (not literally!!!)
So if you have any suggestions or additions PLEASE tell me.
Critiques very welcome.
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silly-froggy Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014
This absolutely beautiful. There are tears in my eyes
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Bleachisepic Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconcuterainbowplz: Love. This.
Very nice wording--I especially loved the Blue's description.
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HarryPotterFreak09 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh bugger! I shan't critique it, because I haven't the faintest idea how to go about it and because I'll be very 'ooh it's just fourteen out of ten' and slower to post it than a wet week. So... :cuddle:
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cinty-insanity Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2010
Haha, aaawwh, thanks anyways XD
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HarryPotterFreak09 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
:happycry: Lovely. If I were blind, I'd definitely have someone read this poem to me.
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